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A jam submission

Fyraia LakeView project page

Submitted by Quilow — 1 day, 14 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Execution#253.2223.222
Composition#323.1113.111
Overall#323.1893.189
Correlation to Theme#333.2783.278
Listenability#343.0563.056
Vibe/Atmosphere#393.2783.278

Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Description
A lake. Gentle. Simple. Just waiting for the bloodsheet to start over its precious substance, even more precious than its water. Every drop of it would be worth millions on Earth. Here, it's just within our reach to take and weaponize against each other. Fyraia lakes never ignite on their own. It would always be a human or an intirna who starts the fires. Why would intirna start the fire? Why would they attempt to burn the bodies of one of their own? Would they ever be able to forgive themselves, even if they used the power of their race to erase the danger from the surface of Achraja? No. The fires were always started by humans. The ones wasting the precious resource that gave birth to their bodies, even when these were mere copies of their former selves.

Liora Lev watched the burning lakes around the Independent City on the horizon, trying to imagine herself somewhere else. Somewhere where she would be safe and free from the burden of her choices. She wished that she were at the secret lake she saw once at the artwork. The memory of her earthly eyes flashed in front of her. Lake Biwa. The secret lake. Memories clashed. She was drifting through the blue, clean water. Her daughter was by her side, holding her husband's hand. The sight of the loved ones that her Achrajan eyes have not seen and will never see. And the sight of Orla, whom she had never seen on Earth. The loyal soldier who refused to drop her weapon and protected her against the bloodthirsty rebels as long as it took for the commander to finally enforce the amnesty for all.

At the next moment, the lake was on fire. Orla was gone. Liora was alone in the water, but she was not drowning. Fyraia was too dense to let you submerge.The flames felt cold around her. She was alone, and yet, she could hear the voice. The assuring one. It introduced itself as Allia, an Intirna. Then came the whirlwind of voices and names that she could not recognize. And between them, the plan. A faint path that ensured that both worlds could live in peace, even if there was a price to pay for both.

Liora felt as if someone held her hand in a gentle but strong grip. Then came the warm embrace that she could sense but could not feel the touch of. And for that one moment, she felt that everything was going to be fine.

Link to Streaming Service
https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=U5L1SUjN9J8&si=i-kcayUSRWWW6Wra

DAW Screenshot - Demonstrate that this is your own work
https://imgur.com/a/dezcLyf

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Comments

Submitted

The mix could use some work but everything surrounding it is quite nice!

Developer

Thank you!

Submitted

Loving the interconnection between background and motiv. 0:40 transition is really unique. The percussion attack took me a bit away from the lake vibes, but after listening to the track I am reading your story, so I am understanding now more of the dark and warry nature of some of the elements of the piece. Very good work with the drone layering. 


Execution: 4

Vibe: 4

Composition: 4

Listenability: 3

Correlation to Theme: 3


Ratings criteria: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LEz4pyyHR7iQ75W2IFjA22odaeDNmdm-/view?usp=drive...

Developer(+1)

Thank you very much!

Submitted (1 edit)

really enjoyed your world building write up surrounding this. I expected a little more emotional movement from the track given your story, but it’s still very solid. I agree I think the mixing could be better for what you’re trying to do, but the current mix gives it a cool lofi quality you might be able to use in the future if you want to go that direction. I think with improved mixing that would also help people feel the movements you do have a bit more. Enjoyed this one!

Developer

Thank you for the feedback :D 

Submitted

Great job overall! The mix is a bit dry and the percussives in the early-middle section sound muffled more than expected - they could stand out more prominently. I liked the experimentation with different sounds, especially for this theme.

Developer(+2)

Thanks for the feedback and the tips. Mixing is hard :D

Submitted

Cool textures, hard to describe but it sounds gentle and harsh at the same time, I like the artistic direction you went for, I was almost expecting an even bigger expansion into something growing more and more, I think there is room for something even more awesome there, good job !

Developer

<3

Submitted

Very Experimental Soundtrack! Interesting to hear all the various Instruments used. Honestly give me some esort of Silent Hill Vibes too. Pretty good job you did!

Developer

Thanks!

Submitted

You're welcome!

Submitted

Loved the track and enjoyed the worldbuilding to go with it! A lot of super cool sound selection and spacing going on. 

Developer(+1)

Thanks! :D