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Absolutely gorgeous work you've put together. The use of layers and movements and perspectives really make it feel very lively. And credit to the voice actors too!

I do feel the transition from the real to the theater like section is a little harsh in styles, going from a very cinematic display to a gamey display gave me some dissonance in a bad way, and I would have liked to see these mesh a little better in theme (though obviously they should maintain their different styles). Not really sure there is much more constructive I suggest for it!

Thank you very very much!! I appreciate the feedback! Taking notes on the dissonance in a negative manner though. We wanted to have that harsh change to really give it a "dreamworld" vision but I'm glad you voiced an opposing opinion to it :D

Excited to play your game!

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Yeah, I absolutely got the dissonance thing, and it definitely needs to be there, I think the largest part is the change from soft text boxes of the real world to explicit "you are playing a visual novel" text boxes. I think adding a little bit more of an explicit text box to the real world would be how I'd solve it. It's at a point where people are still establishing their expectations so it shouldn't really get in the way of your excellent styling to start with and it should mellow the difference between cinematic and game.