The story kept me hooked until the very end. I didn’t expect Jonah to be the one responsible, though I would’ve guessed it was some kind of anomaly in the form of a guardian entity. The colors really help set the mood, and the sound design genuinely gets you good! Overall, the story keeps you on edge while still giving you little moments to catch your breath. At one point, I even got some Half-Life vibes from the story.

I would’ve loved for the story to be a bit longer, but I know from personal experience how much work goes into building the atmosphere, while still leaving enough time to actually develop the story itself. Good luck with your future projects!

Actally among one of the best games ive ever played on here, 10/10

really enjoyed this experience! i love Jonah and the atmosphere that was created  

i really liked this game <3 Jonah is so sweet 

Gorgeous character, the story's scope  was very effective for what it set to do. The staging and text effects were great too. At some point, I hid the textbox to admire the art and it was funny how the sprite stops just below it XD
Also so much bonus content in the art gallery! It was a delight to look at. 
You could really feel the despair and oppressiveness sink in as the story progressed and the options dwindled day by day.

Very amazing, this is one of the best vn's ive played here so far. the writing. atmosphere and everything was so beautiful and tragic. made me very emotional and the art is wonderful.

such a wonderful, chilling, emotional little game. the art is gorgeous and the music and sound design are so good. the story is extremely compelling and immersive.

What an amazing game! The moment I reached the first ending, I immediately started a new playthrough, and that went on until i managed to get all three endings. 

Huge praise to everyone who worked on this project. Like all of it was so so amazing, the visuals, the music and the storytelling are fantastic. I really hope to see more of it in the future, especially if voice acting can be implemented. I believe that would be the cherry on top!!

Creo que uno de los mayores fuertes del juego fue su historia y, naturalmente, Jhona. Como el otro (y único) personaje además del protagonista, la forma en que su personaje está construido hace que empatices con él y le agarres cariño, incluso si la experiencia no dura más de dos horas. El diseño artístico es bellísimo y realmente logra crear una atmósfera atrapante que te pone en los zapatos de un simple empleado dentro de este facility. Me encantaría que la experiencia hubiese sido más larga, por supuesto, pero también me llevo una muy buena memoria de ella.

I played this with my studio partner tonight and we absolutely loved it! We got invested very quickly and it was such a well written story and experience! The atmosphere and sound design were immaculate and you did a wonderful job portraying the absolute dread of the characters and the hopelessness of the situation. I also really like how we got right into the story with very little messing around, you were very effective with the exposition. You're sitting in one room for the entire game and it never felt repetitive or boring, I was fully interested the entire time.   We obviously went through it afterwards and got all the endings.

I also have a tall, blond oc with long hair with a similar vibe whose lore we made into our entry for the jam, so we got attached to Jonah VERY quickly haha! We love oc brainrot in this household. 

We had a great time playing this and I can't wait to see what else you cook up in the future!

-Lycan

I fell in love with all of the writing, and also Jonah, it left me wanting more but in such a plesant way, it definitely incites love for the world and that draws fandom and fan works!! Loved playing through it was very immersive! Definitely felt some psychological horror elements!!

I adored the writing and the sounds of the anomalies; it's the little details that bring it to life and make it so immersive. Despite it being a little short, it really left an impact, and I was left wanting more!! The visuals, the art, and lastly the music were impeccable; once again, those details made it very immersive. Amazing story, would play it again. 

The art is so good, the audio and writing are really good, such a tragic short game.

I love this game. The story is great. The Art style is impeccable. I love the overall vibes and the music contributes to it greatly. A somber and beautiful story. Thank you for making such a masterpiece.

Absolute masterpiece! ❤️

Eu espero que tenha mais sobre esse jogo no futuro :D a arte é linda e a historia é bem tocante