Thanks for the thoughtful feedback! Honestly, there was supposed to be more between the kids and the next fella Mr. Morrison talked to in order to slow things down a bit for him. I worried about things happening too quick there, but most of it came down to the time constraint in the end! Had to scratch some characters and some lessons, for sure. This was my first game jam and I definitely overscoped a little bit in terms of what all I could fit in! Also, since I am not the programmer, I didn't realize how long it would take to implement certain things like animations between dialogue etc. A great learning experience. In terms of the other characters, fair enough haha. I'm new to writing, and probably put myself into the characters sometimes when I should have tried to step outside of myself, if that makes sense! I'm glad you enjoyed the art and sound! And I really do appreciate the honest feedback a lot. There's a lot of nuances in story-telling for sure, and hearing from lots of different people really helps me pin down what works and what doesn't :)