This was such a cool game! I really love the artstyle though some parts of it does need polish but its completely understandable for a game jam. The fact that you've succesfully made a metroidvania in 2 weeks is also really ambitious and impressive! The level design was quite fun and everything fit the game perfectly. Though I do think the text shaking for the dialogue was used too excessively but other than that, I had fun! Great work!!
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There's a couple of things to polish, I think going back to talking to the same person I talked to before should've been a different dialogue to make it more alive. As I mentioned before, the use of the shaking text was a bit too much making it a bit hard to read at times.
A bit more SFX when the text is appearing with different SFX for each person and also just for a lot of the interactions in general could increase the feel of the game as well! A bit more consistency in the town could also help with a bit of clear highlight of the door being able to be interacted since the door seems to be blending in with the buildings.
These are some of the things I noticed that could be developed further! Keen to see how the game gets developed in the future!