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THIS IS AMAZING...!? I was IMMEDIATELY hooked upon hearing the first track. If anyone is reading before listening, listen to it in the full ~5 minute video, it is a whole experience on its own and flows BEAUTIFULLY.

Around the ~50 second mark (near the end of "fragment"), the piano morphs into a synth?? I've tried stuff like this but it has NEVER been that clean. This is genuinely one of the coolest EPs I've listened to yet. Thank you for blessing my ears.

Inkling is an amazing track and it had me mesmerized. The last song is a great switch of pace, but my only suggestion would be to reconsider the style of drums (maybe do something a bit electronic or a mix?). The snare stood out quite a bit, and maybe adding a bit more percussion (like a shaker) might be cool. In general, I suppose just some more layering in that song.

Last thing might be to improve the mix. There are a lot of cool melodical elements that can definitely morph together a lot better. But all in all, an INCREDIBLE work of art. Perfectly weird and bendy! 

i definitely see this!!

I love the vibe of this project! Very artistically strong songs, and I easily get good idea of the world you're going for. I honestly have no gripes with the songs, I just wish there were more. I am enjoying listening to them on repeat right now!! From the lore, to the music, I think everything fits together beautifully. Great work!

I love the main melodies of these songs! These are very strong thematically have easily immersed me in your world and conveyed your concept. Definitely strong compositionally here. I would've loved to see you follow the jam theme more closely, but regardless, I love how these came out!

An amazing track, I love the use of the motif!! Songs that slowly build are always appreciated. I definitely would love to listen to some more work from you. My favorite part is when the music creatively fades, then dramatically comes back in. I hope to see you at full force in the next music jams!

As far as my insight into your project, I think you might try experiment with breaking the motif somewhere in the song. What you've got is amazing, and it could use some more layering. Like David Caldarellaa said, adding some melodic elements on top of what you've already got would be a great way to spice up the song.