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Love the map! Super evocative and well laid-out. As other's have mentioned, the lore is a bit front-loaded, but the NPCs and locations are well fleshed-out. I could visualize the Founders' story like a movie moment in my head! 

Love the concept, especially the story-craft element to gain a superior reward. Love the map with the different trails and "deep woods" locations. The layout of some of the text boxes was a little confusing. The writing was super evocative and I found myself drawn in to Koschel's story, eager to learn more!

Colors and layout are exquisite! Tons of interactive bits in every location for players to fiddle around with. Great mix of whimsical scifi and fantasy.

Hey there, thank you so much for the review!

I have made a devlog post on my main page with some errata- unfortunately yes the banshee was accidently listed twice, when it should have only been in Loc. 9. All that will be updated post Jam judgement along with resizing the text. 

Hey, thank you so much! Text will definitely get a resize once edits are allowed- really glad you liked the setting though! :)

Thank you so much- I really appreciate it! Text will definitely be getting resized after the Jam hold!

Thank you so much for your review and feedback! To be compared favorably to Dolmenwood is a huge compliment.

I am also someone who prefers analogue materials, so post judgement-period I will look into adjusting the text size. I appreciate that feedback immensely!

Also location 10 is definitely supposed to say "half a clock" rather than half a "slice." I will also be changing that as soon as allowed, hopefully not developing an ulcer in the meantime xD

10-4 good buddy! :D

Hi there- I'm assuming if payment is optional then I don't need to create keys? Just want to clarify :

Just sent an email! Thank you in advance! :)

Hi there- I'd love a pass if you have the time! I just play-tested my WIP yesterday evening, so I'm gonna do a tune-up on my end but then I'd be happy to link it- what's the best way to get in touch? :D

Hey there, sorry to ghost for a few days (no pun intended lol)

My title is Hauntings in the Wyldwood- I've mainly been using Worlds Without Number, but I'm considering going a little lite-er with Knave 2e this time :)

This is only my second Jam ever, and the first one to put together an actual "marketable" project haha.  I'd love some feedback on pretty much all aspects of this process!

So it would be four "pages" right? I.e. like a pamphlet. Also trying to make sure I'm visualizing correctly here