I really enjoyed how the narrative was structured to be non-linear, that definitely added a twist I didn't expect. I also find the premise of your story to have a pretty good potential. Somethings I'd add that I think would improve your game would definitely be a bit more interaction from the player's part. So, having the dialogue more spread out by having characters speak part of it, then move a little forward, speak the other part of it. Also by maybe adding answer choices, that don't necessarily change outcomes, but add that extra element of interaction to keep players engaged!
This game was honestly very impressive. I really loved how unsettling the imagery was, and how much you used the environment and game actions to explain the story. The sound design was also creepy as hell and made me feel very disturbed, even though I was playing as the killer. The only feedback I'd give is that there isn't an exit or menu button, in case the player needs to pause or leave mid-playthrough. But this was overall a great game, and I can definitely see it becoming even better once you scale it up!
I really enjoyed the idea of having a shooter where the player can't move backwards. This can definitely scale up to very interesting gameplay in the future. One thing I'd add, just to make things a bit more engaging for the players, is definitely adding more enemies in the beginning levels!
I was really spooked out about the atmosphere; I think your team nailed the feeling of exploring a maze in fear! Would have definitely loved it even more if you added a stalker system chasing you around the maze after getting a certain amount of keys, and the jump-scare image was a bit scarier.
