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Really nice idea! The glitch UI effects are a neat stylistic choice, but fair warning, they ended up making me a bit dizzy after looking at them for a while. Softening that effect or adding a toggle for it would be super helpful. Still, a very creative entry!

Good story! The narrative instantly pulls you in and keeps you invested.

One small formatting nitpick: there's an extra space after every apostrophe in the text (like in 'It' s' or 'hasn' t'), which gets a bit distracting while reading. Fixing that kerning/text formatting issue would make the reading experience even smoother.

Great work overall!

Such a wonderfully relaxing game! It has a really lovely, calm atmosphere that makes it a joy to spend time with. My only small note is that it can get a bit confusing at times to figure out what to do next. Still, a very peaceful and charming experience overall. Great work!

Good game but a bit basic. Just one funny little detail that kept distracting me: the rain direction seems to be going the wrong way lol. Other than that, lovely work on the submission!

Neat concept and art! One small piece of constructive feedback regarding the dialogue: having to click 'continue' after each line is a bit distracting, especially because the button shifts position from side to side depending on which character is speaking. Keeping it in a fixed, consistent spot would make the flow much smoother. Great work on the entry overall!

Love the idea! Such a cozy game 😌

Really cool concept! I love the core idea behind this. My only minor critique is that the music doesn't quite fit the vibe, it feels like it's aiming for something relaxing, but the track choice pulls against that a bit. I also found out from the other comment that the wake of the rocks were a speed boost which surprised me because I had the same thought about turbulence slowing down the flow. Still, a neat project!

Really charming little game! I love the simple mechanics and the relaxing, straightforward gameplay loop. It captures a really nice mood.

One small quality-of-life suggestion: it would be great if we didn't have to fully restart when things don't go quite right, and could instead just keep using gusts freely. But overall, a lovely experience. Great job!

Such an atmospheric game! Exploring the desert and uncovering each level made for a really engaging narrative. I especially love the inspiration drawn  Libyan folklore coupled with the sand dunes, it gives the whole experience a memorable vibe. Plus, having a browser-playable web build made jumping straight into it super easy. Great work to the team!