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heyy i loved your tracks they aree sooo good, u really inspired me to make more music

heyy just came from the stream i really like your track!!, i like the vibe you where going for

thanks for the feedback!!, yeahh comparing to other submissions it might seam like a bit shallowed but i truly believe it has some charm.

anyways thanks for listening to it :D

I really enjoyed this one. It's very original and has a beach aesthetic in my opinion. I don't think your song needs any change. It's pretty much perfect in my opinion.

Good work!

It has a unique style, it has some interesting harmony, it seems that it has a free structure, it would be interesting to see it with more structure, a clear melody and variants of it.

I could see it being used in a team rocket scene, or maybe an industrial city.

Anyway, keep up the good work.

Thanks for the feedback, it’s really helpful!

To be completely honest, when I recorded those two instruments I didn’t feel the need to add more. It’s true that the track becomes a bit homogeneous, but I can see myself just looping this song and zoning out.

Also, I didn’t really know what else to add hehe. I feel like a percussive instrument is the only thing that’s missing, but I think it might have been too disruptive. Maybe some chords could have helped.

Either way, I’m still learning to compose music. This small project is a stepping stone, and I hope to gain more experience and skills in these types of jams. Thanks again for the comment! :D

Thanks for the feedback! Later this weekend I'm going to try adding some percussion to see if it sticks.

Just now I get the “marchy” vibe you were talking about, and now I can’t get it out of my head haha.

Thanks a lot!! It’s reassuring that you like it. I hope to get better with time.

I hadn’t thought about adding a percussive sound to simulate snow

that’s an interesting idea. Maybe later I’ll give it a try.

It reminds me of the early Gym themes! It has a very interesting foundation. I would like to hear it with drums or guitar added to it. As others have also commented, it would be even better if it were longer.
either way its sound good :D

i will be more careful with the sounds levels next time, am still learning about the ins and outs of the woovebox

either way thanks for the feedback its really important for me.

my favorite so far!!

sounds really good!!