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lot of fun everywhere in this adventure. It's dripping creativity and is always unexpected, without being too much or too hard to be delivered. Great adventure indeed. Maybe le dugeon map can improve a little?
Fun creatures and NPCs! I dig the hexmap. The hexsail probably works better for me than the dungeon--it's so hard to fit both things into just a couple of pages.
An extremely efficient module. This should be peoples' benchmark for writing short adventures - it gets across everything you need to know, the layout allows a lot of information to get into not a lot of space, the text formatting makes parsing text extremely legible, and establishes just enough information about the game world that lets this be consistent but be a unique experience at each table.
Delightful little hexcrawl, with quite a nice bit of worldbuilding here that manages to be simple but very evocative. The furlin settlement and the heretic worshippers of the orca are my favorite bit.
This is such a cool locations with a compelling hook and some excellent atypical creatures to come across! Suffice to say it’s going STRAIGHT into my MöRK BORG sandbox
I like the overall package! Always cool when there's a mini dungeon included. Would have been a good opportunity to play around with interconectivity a bit more. But otherwise nice!
Thanks for the feedback!
Where are you missing interconectivity? Between factions/locations, or specifically in the dungeon?
More so in the dungeon. It wouldn't need heaps but I feel like the secret door currently doesn't make heaps of sense. An alternative (maybe hidden) entrance or exit would add something too. You want the players to go "ooooh" and feel accomplished if they figure it out. And it should provide an edge or a reward.
Great to look at and very usable. Amazing job!