I just submitted my game and I'd like to get some feedback since I had very little time for playtesting.
If you want feedback for your game as well I'll gladly help!
Hi Mr Pickles
Well done on your game submission! I love the concept and the art style, music is fitting too! I also noticed that you added in a tutorial too, super helpful!
Few points of feedback:
Otherwise the game is made really well and I loved the creativity of the ads, great work!
If you're curious, here's my game: https://localhugdealer.itch.io/trust-no-1

About your points:
I really like your game. Not a game loop I though could fit into the theme at all but you made it work with an interesting take on this theme.
It's very polished, smooth and well made all around. The only design choice I'm not a fan of is the sound effects when taking damage and dying. Just makes this a little unserious which kinda goes against the whole mood I was getting from the game.
Really good work overall!
Yes, I agree about reload and metal plates, took me a while to figure it out. But overall the game is fun and I enjoyed the writing as well. I was even a bit said that I couldn't properly read them and fully enjoy because I had to quickly shoot things haha
Maybe mix available upgrades so it adds a bit to the dynamic. Not that they're all available every time but let's say only random 3.
Would appreciate to hear feedback on my game: As I Remember
Art is pretty nice and sound choice is very good. the bug that the first dude is talking in the tutorial is that it doesnt display the wood that is breaking if you shoot it, it takes like 3shots to take the wood down. WHHAHA
it gets pretty unforgiving in the long run even with my upgrades, I think that the enchant bullet is pretty meh, I just rock on the expanded magazine + rapid fire to reach my PB. 
The game feels complete and very aligned with the theme which you can easily recognize unlike mine
Here is my Game I would like if you could give me some feedbacks and advice I can use for my future projects, A rating is good too. Thankyouu
Played the game, it was pretty cool art is pretty nice music is good too, it fits the world very well, I do think that the openning narration is kinda long? and I guess that it tells the story alot if you follow through it, a small suggestion is you can build up the story as you go on the game, not full throttle it in the intro. give clues of the lore as the player spend more time ingame. would like too if you give feedbacks and suggestion for my game. I fixed the issue the game did not post even when I submitted my page. I think that is on me, my internet kinda sucks, but I have refreshed it and it is available for download now, Thankyou very much
Really fun concept with great art and fitting music! The core shooting loop is satisfying, but a clearer visual cue for shooting the screws on metal plates and a simple on-screen reload prompt would smooth out the initial friction. Balancing the upgrade paths would also make high-score runs even more replayable. .. Here is my game : https://vi-vine.itch.io/the-last-beacon . I would wish you to provide the rating and feedback too
Here's mine, it's a 2048 game with a twist /jam/brackeys-16/rate/4951590 I will check yours out soon enough!