(was playing HTML version)
The game visuals are nice and have a good atmosphere.
- I think it would have been better to have the dialogue with characters drawn in a style similar to the game (I know it might be a limitation, as you did use some public-domain assets). The video characters look like some cheap 90s video disc game (unless that was the vibe you were going for).
- I got soft-locked as "Try and complete your task" but forgot what that was; maybe an add-task reminder could be useful.
- In the intro, the text would look better with a background panel.
Lots of potential and good stuff in the game; well done.