Congratulations! The way you managed to create the intended atmosphere was very interesting. It is always great to see compositions that go beyond traditional Western instrumentation.
The tribal flute built a compelling narrative alongside the drums, while the melody conveyed a sense of "floating" and intrigue.
However, I believe the harmony could be further developed to create a more convincing storytelling effect. As it stands, the sound might come across as somewhat monotonous to the listener.
Even so, it was great to hear your creation, especially considering the short time you had to work on it!