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A jam submission

Echoes of UnityView project page

For Composing Game Jam # 9!
Submitted by Andrew — 3 days, 6 hours before the deadline
Rated by 20 people so far
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Description
"The Long Trek" is the title track in my hypothetical 3D adventure game, "Echoes of Unity", that represents the journey that Una is going to embark on, with all the wonder yet isolated tone of the game. "Our Home" is a track that would play during a cinematic cutscene where Una makes it to the festival of Zephania after her adventure to get there. Una, an 18-year-old girl who has lived in the Western world her entire life, makes it her mission to discover her past and heritage by going back to Zephania, the land of undying light and unity. As a flautist (someone who plays flute), she learns different melodies along the way through her encounters with different cultures. As she makes it back to Zephania, the Light Festival begins that night, as "Our Home" is played, representing some of the music that she has learned and her adventure.

I used a core symphonic group of piano, woodwinds, strings, percussion, and brass. For the cultural side, I used instruments like the er hu, bansuri, shamisen, tabla hand drums, and Balkan-Mongolian vocals. For structure, I used Dorian, minor, and pentatonic in the 1st half, then modulated to the relative major in the 2nd half to illustrate that tonal shift.

Message from the artist
Thank you for listening to my two tracks! I have not done a composing jam since 2023, so it's such a pleasure to be back. Here's hoping that I'll do more and maybe collaborate on more game jams.

Theme

Picture theme

How does it fit the theme?
What stood out with picture were the eclectic cultural outfits and diverse colors, alongside the mixed instruments (sitar, violin, etc.). Because of that, I wanted to convey a celebration of all music and culture with the cultural grooves, ethnic instrumentation, ethereal vocals, alongside the core Western Symphony. Additionally, the birds gave me a grand, fleeting feel, which inspired me to include nature sounds in the middle and use these grand, wondrous chords at the end. Lastly, the composition diversity of the picture inspired me to create an emotional arc of perseverance with the 1st half and celebration with the 2nd half, and finally ending with a sense of revival and wonder.

Link(s) of the submission on streaming services
https://andrew-nugooyeen.itch.io/andrew-nguyen-our-home

Number of tracks
2

Genre

Orchestral
Ambient
World/Ethnic
Folk/Acoustic

Soundtrack use permission

Yes (CC BY)

Any project

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

Man, the voice in the first track was totally unexpected! I think you can humanize the plucked strings a little bit to make it sound a tad more realistic. Totally loved the way the instruments were mixed. The general feeling was astonishing. I only feel some weird harmonies at around 1:41, some major/minor chords inconsistency that doesn't ruin the experience but I usually pay attention to how it is used because at times it works, at times it does not.

The Long Trek was such an experience, I felt lost in an empty space, staring at the stars in the middle of the night.

I needed more hahahaha
Very good job!

Developer (1 edit) (+1)

Thanks! Also I'm guessing you mean the voice in the second track. The comment about the harmony is totally fair. It is a mix of major and minor diatonic chords. I'm guessing the interplay between that didn't work for you as well. I also could have added a bit more automation on the plucked strings for sure. I would have made a 3rd track but just didn't have the time to unfortunately (it would've been an overworld biome theme). Appreciate the feedback and I'm glad you vibed with both! I loved your submission as well. You had some interesting harmonic choices.

Submitted(+1)

I can’t really say anything critically, but I really enjoyed the mix of different instruments, especially the erhu, that’s something I haven’t heard much in other scores.

Developer

Thanks! Glad you found the erhu element captivating among the other cultural instruments and sounds.

Submitted(+1)

Really liking the vibe of "Our Home" and I can appreciate the subtlety of the first track being just a flowing woodwind. With the second track I could imagine being immersed in a festival and the various instrumentation from around the world gives it a very culturally rich atmosphere and the music feels very thoroughly crafted to be as expressive as it could be.

Fantastic Work!

If I had to say one bit of constructive criticism it might be that the jump from the first to second track is quite sudden but given it's only two tracks it doesn't detract from the quality of the scores themselves, which I find very well structured!

Developer

Thank you! You are correct that it is like a celebratory festival of different cultures. If I had more time last week, I would have loved to make another track to connect both tracks a bit better, but I'm glad you find them well constructed!

Submitted(+1)

I really like the style you went for. It fits very well and is very whimsical! I'm also a sucker for any sort of vocals in tracks, especially jams. The vocals had me vibing so hard, and unlike some other entries you didn't use them too little. Perfect amount of vocals. Really solid entry!

Developer (1 edit)

Thank you! I had such a fun time layering the vocal melodies in terms of the harmony and rhythm design. 

Submitted(+1)

Our home: really enjoying the interplay between the vocals and the instrumentation! This was a lot of fun to listen to.


also for future reference: I was unable to get your first track to play on mobile, I haven’t had that issue with SoundCloud or YouTube. Might want to go that direction so more people can listen to all your tracks!

Developer

Thank you! Glad you liked the countermelodies. Also, the mobile itch.io site is a bit scuffed, so it might just be that. Maybe try using desktop?

Submitted(+1)

I am tragically trapped in a Tuscan villa on vacation without my laptop so that is not possible ;)

Developer

Haha no worries! Enjoy the vacation ;)).

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

Great work! I, like many others, really appreciate the developments you have in your second track, but I definitely think The Long Trek is my favorite because it really sells the ambiance you were going for and sets a great tone for Our Home to work.

Developer (1 edit)

Thank you! It's cool to hear someone enjoy the first track more than the second, haha. But you're right that I wanted to set an ambiance that contrasted with "Our Home" to make the payoff worth it.

Submitted(+1)

The Long Trek - has very pleasant vibe Our Home - I like that transition to calm in the middle of the track Vocals are peak!

Developer

Glad you loved the vocals! It was one of the first elements I knew I wanted to add.

Submitted(+1)

Our home immediately hooked me with some fantastic sounds and progressions. And because it's fast and fun which is my favorite.

I love that you included your progression of chords in the process so I could better follow along and hear how things changed and evolved. It was deep and complex while being easy and fun to listen to. My favorite parts were of course the fast and rhythmic parts such as the very start. The slower middle section was no slouch though as it still had a fun melody and beautiful chords and notes. 

Excellent work!

Developer

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the journey of the piece and that the chord structure I provided helped you follow along.

Submitted(+1)

Unrelated to the soundtrack, but i loved the cover art! Vocals were unexpected, the other cultural instruments are great too

Developer(+1)

Thanks! Wanted to show an abstract depiction of unity. Glad you liked the vocals and cultural instruments too. Also love the Yosuke pfp

Submitted(+1)

The Long Trek

Beautiful ambience, I loved when the flute in the background played.

Our Home

Amazing cool track ! I really liked the work on the rhythmic part of the track in the first half. I would have loved some bigger drums or impacts to really accentuate each beginning of phrase (when the gong plays)

Lovely vibe shift. And here I got my timpanis, so I'm satisfied.


That track was a beautiful adventure consisting of 3 movements. That 2nd movement had me smile already, because it's the kind of vibe I love, but when the 3rd one started, phew... it was so good, so grand, so powerful. It was a real delight to listen to this track and follow the story of Una. 

Amazing, wonderful job for both of your tracks. You made my day.

Developer

I have no words to say but thank you, wow. The 2nd track was so fun to compose, so that means a lot.

Submitted(+1)

I really enjoyed this! A tasteful mash of both eastern and western musical styles, with clear movement and development all throughout. I'd have loved to have heard a track between "The Long Trek" and "Our Home" to help tie them together, as the correlation wasn't super-duper prevalent until (and from) two and a half minutes into Our Home, but once that woodwind section hit, It all made sense!

Developer (1 edit)

Thank you so much! I wish I had time to make a 3rd track, but I was so busy during the first few weeks of my university semester, haha. Maybe I'll make a 3rd track once I find the time outside the game jam.

Submitted(+1)

Yeah, I feel that haha. I only had time to put together one track I was happy with in between work.

Submitted(+1)

Hello fellow Cubase user :)

Your opening track set a clear atmosphere.

The tonal shift in the second track felt a bit abrupt at first, but the following ascension was powerful and the calming descent after that was lovely ! Well orchestrated :D It conveys the resolution of your story very well. With the voices singing in joy. (There is another tonal shift there right?) It is really seemless, and reinforces the power of the ending of the song. Really great closing ! Congrats :) 

Developer(+1)

That means a lot! Glad the story of my game was conveyed well through the two tracks you listened to.