I really liked the art style and the overall structure, but I couldn't tell why I was "choosing" anything, and it seemed all or most of the choices just led to the same outcomes. The choices also didn't feel like anything... i.e. I didn't feel good or bad about any of them, I always felt like I was picking randomly. I don't mind being a bit lost & confused at first, especially with this theme, but I feel like I need something compelling to keep me interested, and it never came. The bang on the door was a good start, but then it just felt like I was just going with the flow without any interest. The animation stuff was alright at the start but felt long & repetitive as it went along.

I think you're really talented and I hope to see more projects from you! Congrats on the submission!

I'm not sure if the teleportation to previous locations is a bug or a symptom of drinking, but it happened on a non-drinking run as well. I got to a couple of the endings and saved the sister!

can’t stay in bed forever, alas :-)

I love the idea, as I used to read Choose Your Own Adventure books all the time as a kid. Unfortunately, I found the hangover interruptions way too prevalent, and there were a lot of very nonsensical transitions from the story decisions. 

I really enjoyed the artwork and thought the majority of it fit really well. Like some others, I wish there were more sounds than the very limited background noise. I often thought something had broken because the load took a long time and there was no sound to tell me it was still going.

I like the style, well excecuted.

Some more sound effects would defintely make this feel more alove. 
Unique and great work

Cool game, i like the style. It is well executed, i didnt have time to get super far but i will have to come back to it and play more later!

I got to the to be continued branch. It was interesting, making it randomized must have made it very difficult to develop. I did get stuck in the hangovers a quite a bit as you mentioned. The sound scape was quite nice I could hear the sounds panning across speakers, some quiet music might add to the atmosphere. It's an interesting concept and I'm looking forward to see where it goes.

I think the game is unique and simple in a good way. I do enhoy selection games. I do wish the text could go faster o have a button that shows the whole text without it writing out. I can see that a lot of effort went into it.  I can definitely imagine how hard it is to do multiple narrative games and to come up with an interesting story as well. I do wish my actions could lead to more bad consequences though. I also did get the multiple hangovers but you did mention it already so I know that you are working on that.

I saved in one run. But then I watched; now I feel bad! :D Nice game, well put together with the time frame, I only encountered one missing frame. I liked the chalkboard drawings <3

A lot of work went into this. I didn't get to the end but quite a way into it and it did keep me entertained. Honestly isn't the kind of game I would normally go for so nice to try something different. The art style is simple but well done and the narrative is engaging. 

About 5 minutes into it I realized you're playing an alcoholic XD Interesting concept, a lot of reading though but I did beat it.

I didn’t get to the end of it but the story confused me a bit, it went all over the place and was a bit of teleportation to everywhere. And I got tired reading everything which is just a me issue, but voice overs would have been great! Even if it were all in the same voice or with a terrible accent, I would have listen regardless

Narrative had enough intrigue to keep me playing all the way through and try a few options, I finshed with the Flee ending on my first playthrough. The audio and images did ok at setting the mood of the scenes but I didn't feel there was much consequence for my choices.

Narrative had enough intrigue to keep me playing all the way through and try a few options, I finshed with the Flee ending on my first playthrough. The audio and images did ok at setting the mood of the scenes but I didn't feel there was much consequence for my choices.

Nice idea - branching narrative can be tricky to do, interesting story :) Took me a few goes to get the "flee" button (trying not to spoiler) - Well done!

I chose the "drink more and go deeper" way... Oh man, was a bit scary... I am not a novel game player, but sudden game over made me sad a bit - will need to play from start again. But story itself is interesting and good - read everything until I reach my end :)