Thanks for sharing this, there’s a lot here that I enjoyed and a lot I’m curious about! I’ll be honest that I had a harder time connecting with Angel than most people probably will, so take this as one player’s perspective.
part of what drew me to play was the preview image in the page where Angel has a realistic eye overlaid on his face, and I was looking forward to seeing that in the game, so I was a little disappointed not to find it. I also found myself wanting to understand the cult better, it’s said to have people of influence in it so I kept wondering if that was the case why would it recruit through job posters, was angel being honest with the protagonist about what they do? I couldn’t quite tell if I should be worried about the cult or not, and I’d love to know more about it.
The moment where Angel gets shy about being called cute caught me off guard, too. Up to then I was reading his attention as unsettling, phrases like “my Star” and “start afresh” sound like the typical setup of grooming tactics employed by cults, so the sudden tone shift left me a bit confused about how I was supposed to feel about him, in the end I could not find it endearing as I had him pegged for a suspicious potentially bad person. I know that Day 2 had a flirt option, so maybe my choices led me down a path where that felt more abrupt than intended?
I’m very curious about the stalker plot and the cliffhanger, and the break-in scene was a standout for me. I would love to see what happens next, and I hope you keep working on this. Congratulations on finishing a jam entry!