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A jack o'latern spirt moves into the abandoned and run down house next to you and threatens to keep visiting you with haunting frequency.
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I'm going to start this off by saying I'm not a very big fan of visual novels, so take my review with a grain of salt. I'm not sure if this is standard for renpy games, but I would have loved to see more areas of the neighborhood, some minigames, or maybe just more art of Jacquie. I think you have a nice aesthetic and a cute character but I feel like it maybe the player needs more of a reason to ask her the 13 questions other than to just send her away. I would love to see you continue either working on this/making more games because I believe you are a good writer and just need it supported by other engaging aspects.
I want to preface by saying that I typically don't play games of this genre. Had to search up what a pine marten looked like, very cute! Fun idea, love her design! I would love to see a full version with more sprites/reactions!
The dialogue... I feel like... somehow I wish it were more exciting or fantastical? I was invested on if she was some sort of pumpkin creature that didn't know how she was born like with the line abt her mother? Personally, I would like a mini game of some sort, if you could figure it out! Again, would love to see a full version of this game!
Super cute art and she has a fun personality!
Love the illustration, very nice job!!