The sonic space you set up is absolutely excellent, the music is very captivating. The beginning half before the drop was very intriguing and I am curious if you had any direct inspirations for the overall chordal shape. It reminded me of choral music in a strange way, which tends to be pretty religious in nature; not sure if that was an intention, but it's something that struck me while listening. It felt rather dramatic yet tragic, though I do mean that positively. 

I would say the strongest piece of advice I could give is to think vertically, in terms of pitch and range. If you were to lay out every single note on a keyboard, it would be very dense and close together. Albeit you do have a good amount of bass which is nice, but there isn't a whole lot that touches the upper registers. Expanding those ranges I feel can give a lot more space in the instrument's timbres so they don't fight with one another (sonically). For example you have your violins repeat a motif a few times, but it could easily be an octave higher, or at least can change between them for dramatic effect. 

Overall, this was a very nice listen and the development felt nice; it was cohesive and consistent which worked well to accomplish your ideals. I definitely hope to hear more of your works!

Very tragical and epic track. Really immersive and with harmonic changes and beautiful melodic lines reminding me of Yann Tiersen's work. Great job!

I love the strings at the beginning, it doesn't stop and keeps the tension, the atmosphere still until the energetic part. And that part is well transitioned with the strings sounding like waves, it increases in volume then decreases like it's move forward then backward and again. The drums are powerful, these are good. The ending is very satisfying with that ritardando, the drums getting louder and that tubular bell, I think ?

It might be weird what I'll say, but it reminds the credits music of season 3 episode 2 of the show "The Owl House" (a TV cartoon) and the ambiance reminds me of the "Desordre Song" from Kaamelott (a French TV show).

It was a nice music, loved the drums !

The lead-in from the beginning into the drum part (starting around 0:53) is absolutely epic and the end with that anvil hit turning into a bell sound gave me Andor season 1 vibes and related goosebumps. Overall, you have applied your sound effects very nicely, not drowning out the music but also constantly adding flavor to the track. Really cool.

My biggest hangup is the two different clock ticks - I think, that should have been one effect, maybe both of them layered together. And that is pretty much all I can come up with to criticize, your track is just that powerful.

Hey, I've just listened to your track!

I really loved your music. It fits the end credits context perfectly, and I can definitely hear the steampunk influence.

I especially enjoyed the beginning, which is very well done, and the transition into the more energetic section is awesome. I also really liked the instrumentation and the sound effects. The only point I would mention is that the drums felt a little too loud in the mix at times.

Aside from that, this is a really solid submission.

Good luck with the rest of the voting period!

This is epic!! First part is very moving and the second part's energy is perfect for the brief. I have no criticism, ending is very creative and cool as well.

Good job on this track! Loved the big drums section and the decrease in tempo at the end.