Thanks for checking for us.

Did you play through it or just read so far?

Ok, I addressed page 40 for both rooms B and E. Thanks!

For this comment, I'd like some clarity. Let's discuss.
"There isn't any explanation for the section with DEF and ATK. You have a max but it doesn't say if you start with that or start at 0 and can get up to that?"

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For the Traits (Str, Dex, Con, etc.) and Stats (HP, Def, Atk, Dmg) there are places for the "current value" and the "max value."

It is common and likely clear that with HP, your value can drop below the max as you take damage. So a blank "current value" is there to keep track of this.

As you level up, you get to increase your Traits. That is why we didn't put in the starting values for these into the boxes.

Also, you get bonuses from items you equip to both Traits and Stats.

It is also possible through death penalties that your Traits and Stats may drop below their max. 

We want you to have room to make changes to these as your character progresses. But also note what the values should be.

Perhaps we can make the following changes.

As I've written this out, I'm considering the following changes:

Remove the "max" text for both Stats and Traits. Place the numbers for the Traits in the larger box on the left. That would allow the smaller box to exist for changes from death and equipment boosts.

What do you think?

I also found the rules for combat slightly vague when it comes to multiple enemies. Do I fight them one at a time? Do I roll and attempt to attack all of them in each round? Do I attack one, but they all attack me? I sort of just decided how I wanted to do it and went with it for the sewer rat encounters, but it would have been nice to have more guidance on that, especially if I weren't someone with RPG experience.

And the Habbits also start with Sunday!

The solution has been racking my brain because it isn't easy. 

Since there are an odd number of days in a week, AND since most people don't work on the weekend, we combined Saturday and Sunday into the same space as the other days. It helped us keep enough room here to have the story at the bottom. 

There is no easy way to re-arrange these and maintain the same space.

So the options are either:

A) Start the monthly pages with Monday (which goes against the norm in the US). We would then have the Habits and Daily Pages also start with Monday.

B) Have the days of Weekly pages set the same as the daily pages, with "Su M T W Th F Sa". But this adds more work for you, the player, to do this every week. However, as a bonus, someone did comment that they work on the weekend and would like more space for Sat and Sun.

Thoughts?

Ah yes, a Pet is a Party Member, and this area does need clarification.

Also, I will be adding Stickers to the Physical version (digital Stickers here) for both Equipment and Party Memebers. Physically, you will be able to peel them off and place them in the Equipment or Party Member section. You will see that the Followers and Pets have different sizes for the different boxes.

Without using the stickers it would be advisable to write down the Party Member's Name and Ability in the boxes provided.

Here is the updated description. Is there anything else you think I should add?

There are pages when you can hire party members to accompany you. They can give your hero access to abilities they might not know, or grant an additional bonus if the ability/skill is already known. 
You may need to pay an initial fee to hire the party member. Then, assign them to an open spot in your party. There are 8 slots available on the inventory pages for party members. You may have up to 4 followers (the larger boxes) and 4 pets (the smaller boxes). You may use the stickers in the physical version of the game to place in the boxes or write in the abilities you now have access to.
You can switch these out when you rest and on days when you acquire a new Follower or Pet. If you should die, one can will be taken from you (see 'Dealing with Death'). 

Your input is truly valuable!! 

Rules clarifications are always tricky. Even something that might be simple for 99% of players can stump one player and ruin their experience. Familiarity, clarity, brain fog, and interruption in reading ... anything can cause this. It is hard to avoid completely, but I want to stomp it out whenever possible.

This still helps.

Do you view both pages at a time? Did you print it out or are you using it in a pdf reader. If a pdf reader, is it both pages side by side?

I suspect when viewing digitally, most likely won't see the planner (right) side of the spread. My hope is that when printed, it will be easily viewed and stick out, hard to miss.