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A jam submission

Please Leave the CarriageView game page

Ticket, please. Catch the fare dodgers.
Submitted by finalyfin — 9 hours, 48 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Gameplay#2073.5443.544
Enjoyment#2243.6503.650
Innovation#3013.3883.388
Overall#3533.4693.469
Theme#3793.6893.689
Audio#5333.1753.175
Visuals#6843.3693.369

Ranked from 103 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How does the game fit the theme?
Keep your eyes peeled. Any passenger may not be who they claim to be. Catch the fare dodgers.

What code and assets did you not make from scratch during the jam (if any)?
I used asset from itch(barely-games.itch.io/retro-engrave-uigui-kit) for my modal window, buttons and controls. Also, sound design was build from pixabay.com

How many people worked on the game?
1

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Submitted(+1)

Cool idea for a game, the ticket ripping and dragging it to kick or re-seat people is such a funny little mechanic haha. I was a bit lost at first on the drag and drop thing, so a tiny tutorial hint would help, but once it clicked the time pressure and weird train rules made it super fun. Nice one :D

Submitted(+1)

It is nice to be for once the one checking the ticket:P

This is a very cool game concept I don't think I have seen it before. Also the animation of kicking out the passengers is pretty funny XD

As for the feedback I would suggest adding some more QoL inputs. For example pressing E again closes the interaction so you don't have to use your mouse. Similarly having a shortcut for opening and closing the Route would be a nice addition since I have found myself opening it quite often. Also the cursor could be at least two times larger, it has a similar color to the paper background and I have lost sight of it a few times haha

Very cool game, it has potential:)

Submitted(+1)

great game its also pretty polished wich always feels so nice to play

Submitted(+1)

oooh, your Fare Dodger are so much like my game entry!!

You got 99 rating already but have mine too
and also have my best wishes!!

Submitted(+1)

Ian interesting twist on the papers please style game. Great Job!

Submitted(+1)

Just played and rated your game!

Really liked the game and idea, a bit confusing at start though. But overall fun!

Submitted(+1)

Didn't realize at first that I have to actually rip the ticket to accept the passenger, but after that had fun. Really nice simple "papers please" like.

The ending sequence (or fail sequence?) made me laugh.

Submitted(+1)

Really fun Papers lease-like. Nice Job

Submitted(+1)

This is sooo fun 😂🚂 The ticket ripping + kicking people out is hilarious and the Papers Please vibe works really well! A tiny tutorial would help at the start, but really cool idea

Submitted(+1)

The ticket animations and the art style is so unique, I loved them a lot. The gameplay is a fun twist on the "Papers Please" mechanics where you have to pay attention to multiple things, super well executed in my opinion. 

One of the things I loved the most was the humor of the game; what do you mean I have to kick all bald passengers?! xD The kick animation was really funny to see too, and there were some... eh.. peculiar stage that make me laugh too.

My only caveat is that it took me a while to recognize I had to drag the ticket to the "kick" and "change seat" buttons, a small hint or tutorial would be appreciated ;)

Finished the game, very fun to play. Great job, it's impressive you managed to do this game alone in only one week :}

Submitted(+1)

Amazing game! I loved the art and specially the ticket animations! The game is really fun and it does fit the theme, since you have to be on the lookout for the tickets that don't match. Great job!

Submitted(+1)

Really fun once you get into it

Submitted(+1)

Really enjoyed the game. It took me a while to understand, but it was a fun game overall! :)

Submitted(+1)

Looks really nice ! I like this game and the atmosphere

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

The buttons dont seem to work? I kept pressing it but nothing happened
Setting the volume was a little confusing, there should be a sound that plays while setting volume, like ROBLOX
Game seem fun tho! Very much like papers please!
Edit: Nevermind i just saw that you have to drag and drop, my bad!

Submitted(+1)

I loved literally kicking people out lol great work!

Submitted(+1)

I liked this one a lot, really well executed. Tearing off the ticket stubs was a very nice touch too, great job!

Submitted(+1)

Pretty solid game matching nicely with the theme. Gameplay core was easy to engage and time limitation made everything more exciting. Well done!

Submitted(+1)

Really like ripping the tickets and the time added a bit of pressure! It was a little confusing with so much to think about from the get go but once I understood it was a fun game :)

Submitted(+1)

Kicking people off the train is fun.  Nice art and sound.  Well put together game.

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