the sound selection is pretty neat, and the mixing is on point

though, i think it sounds a little repetitive, even with the variation in the composition. i also think it was a little lackluster, but i don't know if i should trust my mind with that one cus i literally only listen to loud ass music 😭😭😭😭

A really beautiful piece, my only problem was that the glockenspiel was a bit sharp for my liking at times, but otherwise, great job!

Very good track!

There's good movement here that takes us through a few different emotions.  And i love how you bring the motif in the beginning back at the end to close it out and, although not a full melody, I think the arpeggio works well for the piece.  It's minimal but with substance and I think this was very well executed.

My only criticism would be on your story itself.  I wish you had fleshed it out more, so I could really go where you're taking us, but I ended up having to do most of the work on that front.

Overall, great work

i like your composition here!! i see some folks talking about dissonance being distracting, but i kind of disagree. I think you've done it thoughtfully. at 0:56, the chord you use serves as a transition point to a nice resolution. from a classical theory standpoint, it serves its role! i also like your addition of simple percussion through the latter half. nicely done! i do think the mixing is a lil unclear - the lower end is a bit louder, and i think you might've turned up the higher end to try and balance it out instead of turning down the lower. it's not super distracting though and not a super big deal. love your chord progression, and the instrumentation is very nice! really enjoyed listening to this, thanks for sharing :)

I loved all the slow patient sections in this track, the pauses really bring out the magic in glockenspiel and chimes. With regards to your goal of writing a piece mainly using percussive instrumentation, I think you did an excellent job keeping things interesting by constantly varying the musical ideas throughout the nearly 4 minute track.

Just to give you an alternate perspective on the dissonances that FoxHyode mentioned, I think 1:07 is completely fine, I don't find anything wrong with it. I concur with 0:56 feeling a little too strong for the rest of the track and 0:27 to be a nice touch. This chord at 1:48 is a little dissonant at the lower-mid frequencies, go for more open voicings and try to move dissonant notes to higher frequencies to make them more palatable. However, all these dissonances are fine as long as you intended the piece to feel this way; dissonances are an important tool in a composers arsenal and if you designed it this way you should just ignore my criticisms.

Overall, this is minimalistic but satisfying submission, I never got board despite the track consisting of only a few timbres. 

This soundtrack sound so dreamy I love it

First of all, good job on the composition, you managed to keep the entire piece going on only a few instruments while still keeping it interesting. 

If I had to give some feedback it would probably be the same as what FoxHyode said, most instruments are rather percussive so I think adding a few more (non percussive) instruments would help a lot to bring the track to the next level :-)

Great track, well done!

Feedback as promised (going to go brutal be aware) : 
It's a very sweet minimalist piece, I liked the overall composition process. I like the dissonance at 0:27 if it was intentional it's a nice touch to break the "sweetness". I don't like the 0:56 dissonance though it really mess the feelings I had listening to it, same for 1:07.  Section at 1:41, its getting too percussive, its probably the patch sound but you can solve this with EQ and transient shaper maybe to reduce the hammer hitting the notes or directly inside the patch if its available.  You can also EQ a couple of high annoying frequency on the glock to help the listeners. 

The piece is very gentle and sweet, simple works nicely, you can probably try some arrangements with more instruments and add some textures to it but in the end, it works simple. Still feel there is no real theme as a melody in your track, it's a lot of arpegios, maybe try and incorporate another instruments with an actual melody on top to give your track an identity.

Hope you can take well the critics, good luck !

Love the composition and progression!! Reminds me vaguely of something Tally Hall/Miracle Musical would have included in Hawaii: Part II!