very emotional pieces that communicate a place that’s been lost, now, with nothing but this music to hold it together. I liked End of the World the most. It reminded me of dystopian Minecraft music. Peaceful but sinister, somber, cold. Nice submission man.

You conveyed the desolate nature of the world well! First impression, the piano in your first track is too loud. It could use some automation and velocity reduction, with some added reverb to add more to the soundscape. The elements with the drone-like strings are nice, however. The harmony design was hard to follow in the 2nd track. Might have been because of the muddiness of the strings and the strict quantization, which makes it sound delayed compared to the piano. The 3rd track is my favorite, with the way you used the synth ostinato in the back to convey a sense of inevitability. The detuned, sliding strings were a nice touch too, to add an apocalyptic vibe. Almost gives an Interstellar OST vibe! Try to do more dynamic and automation work with your VSTS. There are some good ideas that are held back a bit by the dynamic being one-note and loud. Nice job!

Maybe it’s because I’m very jet lagged but the first two tracks were hard to keep engaged with. I found your last track (end of the world) was able to pull me in a bit more and I felt more connected to your harmonic movements. The first two felt very similar. I agree with other commenters that more dynamics may help. That being said I think this is pretty on point for music conveying the story you described! Im also very tired so maybe not your target audience lol.

you captured the desolate atmosphere of this world quite well!! i do think having more dynamics to the piano could make the ost more interesting or even add a bit more reverb to it. well done!!

Burning despair does ache, as the world is such empty elusive. I love vibe of all songs, emptiness mixed with loss of something

you certainly excel in storytelling!!! your chord progression and instrumental texture of each track really presents the scene you are trying to represent very well. i do wish i could have received some more melodic variation outside of block chords, but regardless, the composition was still well done! the third track also emulated a chilling vibe through your use of ambient sounds, which works great with your theme. great work! :)

You definitely nailed the post-apocalyptic style. The sense of vastness and desolation is awesome! As some other comments have mentioned, maybe you could vary the texture of the sound a bit more between pieces? For example, I could see parts where you could suddenly cut out the droning in the background, leaving one echoey instrument to play a melody, which could introduce a sense of loneliness and such to your tracks as well. Great job though, the atmospheric sound you created was spot on. Thanks for sharing!

Nice tracks, I definitely felt the melancholy and desolation of this world. Maybe I would have wished for a bit more identity to each track? 

Man, what a vibe.  It's like a mix of 28 Days Later and Disco Elysium.  I can see these playing while exploring the city. Great work

I enjoy the desolate vibe in this one!

Favourite track: End of the World

I love how all the tracks make you feel isolated. 

These turned out great! I really like the vibe the guitar in the background adds to the Faded Memories track.

It's a good one, the post apocalyptic media are common nowadays but it's sill a good one