I can tell there is a lot here and I like the idea of a factorio style game about building an army. But this was very confusing to play. I could not figure out how to deploy my people or if I was making them correctly. From the screenshots this seems to be a fairly complicated game which is neat. But teaching the player how to play it is a challenge. I would shy away from scribbles on a page and instead give very concrete examples and walk the player through step by step.
