Play game
The Last Offering's itch.io pageRate this game
In order to rate this submission you must be logged into itch.io and have submitted your own entry. Anyone with an account can leave a comment.
How does the game fit the theme?
The game revolves around figuring out who to trust in a town divided by its beliefs about the ritual. Building trust unlocks more conversations, while limited time and actions determine how much the player can learn before the ritual takes place
What code and assets did you not make from scratch during the jam (if any)?
We did use the Godot Extension Dialogic, everything else is made from scratch. Oh and the bgm is just some copyright free song.
How many people worked on the game?2
Leave a comment
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.
Comments
Narrative games aren't really my thing, but I like this one. It ended kind of weirdly because we just talked to Maria and that was it. It felt like something was missing, but otherwise it's a good narrative. Loved the art style of this game. Good job!
Thank you so much! I totally agree, the build up was supposed to be much longer but we didnt have enough time haha.
Congrats on the first game jam! Cool narrative with great art!
Love it when the Narrator plays a role in visual novels.
thank youuu!! <3
The narrator cracked me up a couple of times. Loved the art! It's a good effort on the time crunch you had.
Thank you so much, glad you liked the narrator! :))
the visual style is awesome
thank you so much! :))
Beautiful art! Congrats on your first game jam, you did great :) I love an evil narrator.
thanks a bunch!
This was really great and thought through. Would make a fantastic Prototype for a Visual novel id love to play for hours!
Thank youuu!! :))
Nice game! The portraits are very well drawn, and the story is interesting, though it feels a bit rushed at some points. But that's understandable for a game jam. Really nice work!
Thank you so much! Yeah originally it was supposed to be 7 days instead of 3 but time went by so fast haha.
The narrator reminds me of Slay the Princess, which is one of my favorite games ever!
Also loved the characters, designs and overall narrative of the game, well done!
thank you! :))
Congratulations on your first jam game. Everyone who submitted, ESPECIALLY first timers should be proud they finished something. It's an important step, but you submitted something beautiful. You have amazing art and story, something that not anyone can replicate. It's a rough market for visual novel style games but you did well, especially for your first time.
Thank you so much! It means the world to us :))
Nice little game, the narration peaked my interest and the art is absolutely stunning !
Didn't see the ending coming haha x)
I would love to see more if you plan on reworking on the game to make the ending more complete
thank you!! :) we'll definitely expand the story a bit and polish everything, thank you so much for your interest <3
Character designs are great, i love the art some people are talking about how the pastor mocks the player actions and i think that's actually weird because it fits his personality as a character well and made me like the game more, congrats to both you and your girlfriend on your first jam, it was a cool little game
Thank you so much! <3
Congratulations on your first jam. Achievement unlocked! :D
Wow, I love the character portraits! Really nice style.
Some minor suggestions to improve the game:
The grand sacrifice for our lord an saviour <== and
"pff, you still had energy to talk to people. How foolish" <== Please avoid evaluating the choices of the player like this. It's disrespectful.
The transition after the escape could be a black screen with a text. As it is currently it can easily be missed.
If you are interested in dialog mechanics please check out my game(s) - I'm innovating in this space.
Good luck!
Thank you very much for the feeback! We wanted to give the narrator certain traits, so the player notices that he might have his own agenda. We will definetly check our your games as well! :)
hey! congrats on finishing up your very first game jam! hopefully one of many :)
I adored the artstyle! It has a great vibe and is nicely reminiscent of medieval characteristics, which was certainly the intention.
Dialogue felt mixed at times, it definitely seems 2 people wrote it, as certain moments feel less polished than others.
Characters had interesting stories which I believe would've only gotten better if there was more time, but such is the nature of a game jam!
splendid work though, congratulations on what you two have achieved here!!!
Thank you so much, we will definetly do more :)
I wrote most of the dialogue on the last day, so it's a bit messy at times haha. We plan to expand the story and polish the dialogue, thank you for the feedback! <3
That was so good!!! The designs are really pretty, the idea behind it is great, & I thoroughly enjoyed it.❤️
Thank youuu <3
Loved the art of this game! Reminded me of classic folklore books which fits perfectly for the vibe you were going for. The game was a fun and simple visual novel experience, overall I'd love to see it expanded upon with more dialog choices and endings!
Yippieee, that was our goal, thank you very much. We plan on expanding the story and polishing the dialogue :))
Fun little game, got to max trust on my second attempt because i made some stupid decisions on the first one, the art may be the best about the game, congratulations to you two!
Hehehe thanks for playing both endings!!
The art is gorgeous. I think it might be the prettiest out of everything I've seen so far. Great story, and I think it has great potential to be expanded upon.
Awww thank you so much, that's so kind :))
great art and a p cool story! the travellers hips are CRAZY bro
Hahaha thank you! He's got that GYATTTT
Nice art style.
thank you!
I was totally expecting that ending and glad it came! Really well made. This kind of games can be expanded a lot.
Hehehe glad you enjoyed it, thanks a bunch! :)