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Please Leave the Carriage's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Gameplay | #207 | 3.544 | 3.544 |
| Enjoyment | #224 | 3.650 | 3.650 |
| Innovation | #301 | 3.388 | 3.388 |
| Overall | #353 | 3.469 | 3.469 |
| Theme | #379 | 3.689 | 3.689 |
| Audio | #533 | 3.175 | 3.175 |
| Visuals | #684 | 3.369 | 3.369 |
Ranked from 103 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does the game fit the theme?
Keep your eyes peeled. Any passenger may not be who they claim to be. Catch the fare dodgers.
What code and assets did you not make from scratch during the jam (if any)?
I used asset from itch(barely-games.itch.io/retro-engrave-uigui-kit) for my modal window, buttons and controls. Also, sound design was build from pixabay.com
How many people worked on the game?1
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Kicking the bald dudes was super satisfying!
I LOVED kicking bald people, no reason whatsoever, just my job.
Very cool game! Liked it a lot!! For the preview screenshots I thought it was gonna be similar to papers please but it is very different. I had a lot of fun with it, I wish it was longer :)
Pretty good game I like it.
Very, very entertaining and well executed! Maybe the timer has to stop while reading the instructions, or checking the route, esp when the levels are getting hadred.
This is pristine. Increasing variables to keep in mind for a steady game design onramp. And only one person made this? Incredible work. This is a shoe-in.
Great game! I didnt really understand which enemies I should kick out as there is a lot of variables to keep in mind, so the difficulty curve should use some work. a tutorial would be nice. with more practice I am looking forward to beating the game, good job!
Kicking out bald dudes makes me laugh so hard!!! I really enjoy this game. The sfx and visual is so good.
Had a blast playing this on stream today! Really enjoyed kicking some bald dudes haha. Thanks for making it and hanging out today. :D
Very simple game but it works! Ripping the ticket was super satisfying and the art is pretty charming. Great work, especially since you are a solo developer.
A really fun game! I like that you actually have to pay attention to the small details, and the summary screen does a great job of showing you where you made a mistake and what to watch out for on the next inspection.
The most satisfying part is definitely the kick out animation.
very charming gameplay, especially the little kicking animation! Overall very very charming game and i hope you continue with this concept more in the future!
wow! really loved this one. wish there was an animation for walking foward and something to use the money earned, but enjoyed very much! i dont know if i missed something at the end, but there was noone to check on as asked... amazing game!
The game is fun and reminds me a bit of Papers, Please in its simplicity. You get orders, you do them, and somehow it just works really well.
Also, the player should probably be locked up for elder abuse. Apparently “kick them out of the cabin” means literally kicking old people out with your legs.
Wow, I didn't expect the way to remove passengers is just kicking them straight out — hhhhh, that's so funny!
The only thing i think is missing in this game its a propper tutorial, because you dont really know what you're really doing. Besides the tutorial, i think its one of the best one out here, good job mate :D
okay, now, after playing again... great game :), i love the fitting sfx and the art is quite good. Now after knowing how to play it was even fun to play (until i killed one of the illegals and died xD) . I didn't expect myself to like a "detective" game, but i did. Really good job, and execution, but here a few flaws (cause we all have some xD)
1. the name of the citys are overlapping a lot of times, i am not sure what the suggested fix here could be but maybe making the ticket bigger overall and leave more room for the names or sth
2. while i like the kicking out animation, i could imagine that someone could run out of time because of that duration, which i feel like could feel unfair and frustrating. So i'd suggest the ejection kick to be faster or sth so that it doesn't hinder a player from finishing in time.
overall, good game, i may come back to this at the end of the rating ;)
I actually had a progression system where you could buy upgrades using the money and reputation earned during gameplay, one of the upgrades let you simply kick people, just by pressing a button, without checking their tickets. I still regret not managing to finish the upgrade system...
Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it.
Very fun game this game fit perfectly with the theme and expeling passerngers is very fun with that animation the ui was hardto understand but i figured it out .grate game
I don't know if i broke something (if yes then idk how) but neither the kick out, nor swithc seat/carriage buttons were clickable for me for the whole game. all other buttons worked, but those didn't. Imma not give my rating yet and wait for an answer xD
If you happen to drop by again, please drag the ticket into the "kick out" zone. I definitely owe you one :) I made a poor choice regarding the UI element.
Thanks for your time!
ohh, i didn't know i need to pull it xD, imma go try again
Fun game, liked the vibe of it.
I could play a longer version of it if:
- money woudl serve something
- the interaction with the passenger are more deep/various
- the pattern of the game change troughout the run
I didn't understood I needed to tear the ticket until the end because the explanation was hide behind an other text on top
Too much text for the tutorial, could be smoother, don't need that much text I think to explain what you have too do, is kinda direct
Don't hesitate to test our game :/jam/brackeys-16/rate/4942051
Oh, wow, thanks for the honest feedback. It’s really great to see a review that points out what’s actually missing and identifies areas for growth, rather than just the usual "amazing" or "beautiful." Thanks again, I really value this! Btw, your project is absolutely mind-blowing, I’ll write a bit more about my experience on your page.
You're welcome !
Looking to read your feedback :)