Oh wow this is high level stuff! is that you singing or a vocaloid? It sounds amazing. Great job!

Unbelievable—you made this in six hours?? And is this your singing too? Simply phenomenal work. The mixing is highly impressive, and perfectly matches the vibe of the story (cool idea, by the way!)

This is highly polished, and really captures the ethereal vibe. I sure hope you can find some more time for the next jam—I would love to see what you could do with more than six hours. Still, I hope you are impressed and proud of yourself—this is quite a well-done track. Good job, and keep writing!

Just... gorgeous. The soundscape you created in the background is just wonderful and accompagny that beautiful voice really perfectly.

And the result is stunning. Really, it was a wonderful piece. I would love to listen to more of your art.

Hats off to you.

Such a lovely piece ! I Imagine it being played along with the credits of the game and getting very emotional and nostalgic about the experiences I went through... superb potential closer to a game about gathering fragments of the past to go on with light and love.

How did you make the voice ? Is it someone singing, yourself some other technique ? It sounds really good, as the whole song !

Super work, thanks for sharing I glad you could participate !

IT'S YOU!!!!!!!!! i already knew this would blow my mind away before i even clicked play and I WAS RIGHT!!!

the high pitched synths/glockenspiel-esque instruments just further elevates this dreamlike state even i got lost in, the vocals are absolutely gorgeous throughout especially during moments where they would pan around which AUGHH I LOVE THAT SM!!!! one thing i do want to add is that i would've loved to hear more of the choir harmonizations present around the former half of the track to be added to the climax of the track, i think that would make the track burst even more with emotion than it already is!

other than that FANTASTIC WORK!!!!!!

Very beautiful piece, it was a very pleasant listening experience !

The instrumentation, although quite simple, is pretty well chosen and fits the synth vocals nicely, it carries the emotions  of your game's idea greatly.

Great work (and nice choice for the thumbnail also, Mucha is one of my favourites artists and it fits pretty accurately with your piece) !

Such an awesome and unique submission! Really strong melody and accompaniment. Great pacing across the whole track. Any muddiness from the reverb wasn't an issue for me, it all felt quite well balanced to my ears. The harmony is really lovely and emotive, but never too dissonant for the reverb to stick out. If anything it meant each chord melted into each other in a really pleasing way. And when you then clipped the reverb at 2:45 it was so effective and perfect for that build up section. Great work, so glad you spent the time to give us something!

Wow, what a dazzling reverb (what plugin is this?), the introduction is magically ethereal. For 6 hours of work this is incredible; what a beautiful vocal performance (you've got a great vibrato!) accompanied with a gorgeous harmony. I can give you some feedback on the mixing, but you might already know what you're doing and just be time constrained. I apologize if none of this is helpful.

-start advice that you may already know- 
You used quite a generous amount of reverb, and the decay is set pretty high too. This sounds stunning during the sparser sections of the track, but it can become a double edged sword the denser the arrangement becomes. If you have any notes that can create dissonance with the next chord, the reverb tail will carry over and clash with it. There can also be a certain amount of muddiness in the lower mid range if too many sounds accumulate and go through the reverb. There are a number of solutions to this problem, use multiple of them to get the best results:

1.  Use a highpass filter on the reverb to prevent low-mid buildup.

2. If you have notes in the lower mid range that clash with the next few notes or chords, it could be better to swap to more open voicings (push the more dissonant notes to the higher parts of the arrangement).

3. Put your reverb on a separate track, set it to 100% mix and add a compressor with sidechain after the reverb. Send the instruments audio to the compressor's sidechain signal. Adjust the threshold so that the compressor reduces the reverb volume when the mix gets denser. 

-end advice that you may already know-

I think you captured the fleeting feeling of the dreamworld as a person wakes up from slumber. This is a very satisfying final track, it captures a hopeful sense of purpose gained from a long  journey. Congratulations on your first English track, I think it turned out very well. I'm gladyou decided to join with so little time left, this is a great submission.

Um. You nailed it. Especially for only about 6 hours of work time. As far as criticism, the mix sounded muddied in some spots between the vocals and the accompaniment. But considering the brief time spent on the whole song, the mix overall is really well done.

Six hours and this polished and detailed?! But how?!? But why?! What is life???? I have nothing but praise and appreciation for your track. I really like how you contrast each phrase and they feel new and like the next part of these emotions and realizations this character is discovery and processing. All 10s, very enjoyable!

The general musical arrangement is very embracing and the interplay between the voice and the orchestral atmosphere is simultaneously like a lullaby guiding us into another world. Really well done. Very dreamy and beautiful, thank you for sharing :)

The composition was really excellent. Friend of mine has been showing me japanese songs he was listening to, lately, and this one had a very simillar vibe to them. I loved the subtle way the song got more intense as time went on, no obvious drums or instruments. Just great horizontal developement.

The lyrics are pretty alright, but reading through them, I couldn't exactly relate to them very well... But the way they were sung was beauitiful enough to make me get it. I always think of voices as an additional instrument when making songs and this one was an extremely fitting one.

The way the intensity fades out near the end of the song, with only a few instruments playing, was done really well.... It might be due to the reverb, but the instrument choice was also amazing.

The accoustic guitar is a big stand out in this song. It's played in a very soft, graceful way.

I guess graceful is the way to put it with this song. Amazing stuff! Full stars across the boards!

Yooooo vocal track!

Really impressive for 6 hours of work. The vocals and instrumentation sound great.

You did this in 6 hours?! The quality of your compositions always impresses me. The highlights for me in this piece were the lyrics, but also the composition of the melody itself, and the piano accompaniment. While listening to this, I imagined parts of the original Kingdom Hearts game where the premise of things kind of seeming dreamlike seems to fit with your idea. Excellent work on this and thank you for sharing even just one of your compositions!

this is amazing

it sounds so melancholic and hopeful at the same time

im a sucker for any song in an ost that has vocals. is this your voice or some plugin you used? (might be a stupid question)

anyways good job