Very nice mix of electronic effects and more organic instruments. It had a really cool vibe. I will join some other comments to say that it sometimes felt like a stronger melody would have been great to give it some ground.

Great work nonetheless !

Good combination of styles, it work well. The synth travels like they should, never felt bored. It may lack a little "something" like peppe5k commented, some stronger melody or smth to catch the listener ear ? But the fondation is strong and vibby, love it. The mix sounds really good in my headphone, maybe a little to bassy by moment ? 

Extremely vibey. I love the mix of electronic sounds and more traditional/cultural touches. I would definitely see this as a song running during an exploration filled with mystery, with a very driven character. 

Hello there and good to listen to your work here!

I'm such a sucker for Chrono Trigger, Cross and anything Mitsuda worked for, so you really got me with that harp playing in the background, but I particularly enjoyed what happened at 3:06! The percussion and the bass somehow made me think more of Donkey Kong Country hehe

I feel like you managed to create a very cool flow with your creation. And maybe that's what you went for, you just followed the flow. I'd have personally liked more depth and something more "catchy" to whistle while doing chores, because the general atmosphere is such a vibe! Also, the ending was just... There...  I felt you could have developed more and brought us towards something, and that's true for the whole composition.

The instrumentation and the whole sound is sooo spot on, it feels light and aethereal. Nice picks!

I wouldn't mind listening to this with a SNES or Mega Drive soundchip.

Cute work all in all!

I feel like going a city night walk with this

The new sound (mallet? synth?) at 3:06 is a fun refresh to snap the ear back to attention. Overall the mix is good, and the composition/instrumentation is appropriate throughout. Great job!

love the constantly shifting textures!! wasn't expecting an ASMR solo LOL but also i just wanna say your usage of effects is super interesting! especially early on with the trance gate (i think that's the term ) on some instruments and whatever effect it is, it must be something pretty simple, on the hand percussion

This certainly is a vibe, however I can't help but feel like this entry is lacking a bit of personality. Especially with its presentation. I did like the switch up at 3:05 though. Solid entry 👍

I'm a huge fan of the sound, so atmospheric, so subtle but fun to listen to. I really like how you bring together so many little details and touches to elevate the texture of the music. I could totally see this as a level BGM, and I would love to listen to it. Great work! Thanks so much for sharing!

Nice work! The first part sounds to me like a sega genesis adventure, like Ecco the Dolphin. Pretty vaporwave vibes. Not a fan of the growly bass at the end tho, sounds a bit loud and out of tune. 

the orchestration as the song began sounded nice, like rain drops or something
i feel like there could have been more development in the middle
also the switch-up with really gave the song a new (more ominous?) feel togehther with the sound design during that segment with the low growling thing, that sounded good