This is really good across all categories! A few notes:

• Is there a procedure for traversing a hex? Should I just assume that one random encounter happens in each hex and when that is done and the party has crossed the hex? How long is each hex? This affects how often they'll have to stop to eat and rest.
• On the back of the panel it says that the crate must be carried by two players but in the spread it says one or two depending on party size. I would just work on this language to make it more consistent/clear.
• Would love to see some sort of penalty if the players are forced to crack into the crate to survive, or if the players don't know what is in the crate, a rumor table to create confusion/dissension could really ramp up the intensity of the trek.

Really good overall, I love this!

This is great, the themes presented along with a very visually appealing look make for a great read. I like the Crate mechanics as an additional hurdle the party must overcome. Some changes to consider:
A bit - > A Bit
The Lighthouse could be mentioned as the Foghouse
There was already some disqussion on the trick thing, but it does seem it was mostly intended as a weaknsess. From 0E:
TRICK: Players need to fight smarter, not harder. The Trick section provides just a few possible exploits to take advantage of in order to survive or end the fight as soon as possible.

However, in Into the Fog one of the creatures does have a benefit along with its weakness, but the overall intention is pretty clear.

nice one Haven!! I feel like if I was on this journey I’d eventually bust into that crate to see what the hell im going through all this for lol  

I see others have already mentioned the Trick thing  

Also in the Black Hounds star block you have it spelled “Hount”, perhaps you’ve already fixed that. 

Generally really cool and feels like I can run it right now if I had to. 

Nicely done. Love a good hex crawl that blends solid tables and a great theme. I appreciate the stat blocks, as the PHB for FF only provides 4, so having some additional options to fill out a land is nice. My only gripe may be a difference in interpretation of the Trick. I understood the Trick of a stat block to represent a piece of information that could help the PCs fight more intelligently. But it seems, however, that you all have interpreted it to be a note for tactics for the Guide to know how best to use those stats. I don't think either is wrong, but it was unexpected for me.

The setting is incredibly evocative, and I was able to picture myself and my table running a session (kinda the hallmark for me and if I vibe with a game). I think the only thing I, personally, would balance is adding a couple of neutral and positive encounters to the table. I know the system is built to wear players down, but I wouldn't want to turn the session into a meat grinder too quick. Again, that's personal preference.

Really solid submission!

The art is cute - I like the map in particular. This is a really accessible, easy to follow adventure and wouldn't take much to get going at a table! Well done team!

• I find the x-height on the font makes it a bit difficult to read. 
• The encounters table could probably be condensed down into a d10 (there is already one duplicate entry). This would also maintain consistency with the die type of the system.
• The hex-crawl feels a bit deceptive - what would lead a group not just to take the most direct route? (the variety of environments doesn't really change on an alternate path)
• Enemies: The Trick should be their weaknesses, not (just) special abilities.
• The Giant Hermit Crab is probably going to kill everyone if combat starts! (that's alotta health and damage)
• I want to hear more about the volcano and the freezing sea and the storied beach! 

Really love this one. Feels like I could pick it up tonight and run a few sessions without any prep just from the pamphlet. Love the art and layout too.

This is a fantastic pamphlet, almost top to bottom. The art on this goes so hard and there is a ton of it which make for a wonderful experince reading through and the adventure itself seems like it would make a great first session of Fatherfog. My only issue is that the hexcrawl doesn't tell you how to implement the map in that procedure or how big the hexes are, which make it hard to uses even the FF travel rules. Besides that, the writing is evocative, the theme is excellent, and the layout is intutive. I love this vibe!

So first off this is, of course, a joy to look at and knowing Haven the printability of this entry is just off the charts. 

The back panel's setup of the premise is great too - perfect little encapsulation of a dilemma and your goal. I can pretty much see a party struggling across the beach, carrying this big ol thing of cargo that's so precious, and the tension involved. That's without even remarking on the rest of it. Super awesome economy of words.

So color me surprised to find this is also a hexcrawl! 

This could easily run 2 - 3 sessions and should be a really memorable little scenario. 

The enemies, being mostly mindless or beasts, suffer a little bit from predictable motives but that's a nitpick. What I'mm really missing here is, if anything, some unexpected social encounters along the beach. 

I want to know more about what my cargo is; I like how clean and concise everything is (already!), but is there interest in describing the nature of the cargo, its weight, and its utility?  For example: am I lugging boxes or bags?  Will I need to try and make a sled from my ship's wreckage? Can I open my cargo to help me survive certain hexes, at the cost of less profit when (if) I make it to Mirendell? 

That said, I understand that leaving it open-ended makes a lot of sense in the context of a modular trifold supplement, to be dropped into an existing adventure. But if I was solo'ing it stand-alone, I wouldn't mind a suggestion of what my cargo is, perhaps from a condensed 1d5 table or even just a blurb of flavor text,  maybe on the backpage with the lore premise.

That's the only suggestion I have for now; great work!