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A jam submission

The NarratorView game page

You wake in darkness. A voice tells you where to go. But he may lie. Choose wisely or face the terror. Trust no one
Submitted by Blackcore — 20 hours, 53 minutes before the deadline
Rated by 41 people so far
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How does the game fit the theme?
The Narrator and Environment may lie so don't trusr them

What code and assets did you not make from scratch during the jam (if any)?
SFXs and Textures

How many people worked on the game?
1

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Submitted(+1)

The atmosphere is really well done—it genuinely made me feel tense!

Developer

Thanks for playing

Glad you enjoyed

Submitted(+1)

That was interesting! It would be cool to apply pixel art textures or hand-drawn art. Good job!

Developer

Thanks for playing

Glad you enjoyed

Submitted(+1)

hi! congratulations on submitting your entry! 

good job building a creepy atmosphere! although the rooms are bland, they still have an aura of mystery to them which fits the game.

I appreciate the voice acting, other than 1 or 2 inconsistencies but that's being nitpicky. It's the main focus of the game and it's good for its purpose.

I would have liked to adjust my mouse sensitivity and in-game volume. Jumpscares were way too loud.

I also think a few more interesting actions and gameplay features would've made it nicer to engage with, there were one too many sequences of just going to the next door.

However, you delivered a clean game from beginning to end for this jam, and there's great merit to that! Keep it up!! 

Developer

thanks for playing and your report

Submitted(+1)

I enjoyed playing. Not the genre I usually play. 

Well done on making this in the week!

P.S. I was pleased when I found a door that keeps spawning the ghosts if you keep pressing E haha

Developer

Ohh, thanks for playing

Submitted(+1)

As a narrative atmospheric experience, it is very good, innovative, and thematically good. Gameplay-wise, I felt that choices lacked consequences. Overall, I enjoyed playing

Developer(+1)

thanks for playing

Submitted(+1)

Excellent sound design and simple visuals. Proof that even games constrained heavily by time can still create an impactful environment. 

First jump scare got me good.

Developer(+1)

thanks for playing

glad you enjoyed

Submitted

I see the vision and idea. Just currently it felt a bit repetitive and like my choice did not have any impact.

Developer

Thanks for playing

Submitted

voice acting goes hard, although i didnt feel like i had a choice wether to believe him or not, but it was good nonetheless

Developer

Thanks for playing

Submitted(+1)

Genuinely kind of creepy. Also got me with a jump scare, haha. I like the narrator's voice a lot, but I wish he would react to what you were doing more.  

Developer

Thanks for playing

You're right، I wanted the narrator to react more, but the jam time limit didn't allow it

Submitted(+1)

I don't know if it was intentional but I enjoyed the effect of the doors fading in from the flashlight hitting them.

I do wish that the narrator reacted to disobeying in orders in some way, but I understand if that was beyond the scope of the jam duration.

Developer(+1)

Thanks for playing

Submitted(+1)

The storytelling, voice acting, atmosphere and jump scares are great! Made me jump twice haha

Developer

😂 Thanks for playing

Submitted(+1)

I really like the idea and storytelling. I think it fits the theme really well. The programming and game implementation need some work (it froze a lot for me, I assume as it was loading things for the next scene). Good job. This is a solid submission!

Developer(+1)

Thanks for playing

This is my first time making a web game so I didnt optimize it well

Submitted(+1)

Rated!

Developer

Thx

Submitted(+1)

AAAAAAAAAAAAH BRO JUMPSCARED MEE OUT OF MY CHAIR

Developer

Haha! Thx for playing

Submitted(+1)

Hello... So it's kinda funny. According to the description on your game it's kinda simmilar to ours XD. I thought I leave this info here, I think it's funny.

Developer(+1)

That's interesting! It's always cool to see how different devs interpret the same theme. I'd love to play your version

Submitted(+1)

This game is awesome! That ghost is my fav!

Developer

Thx for playing

Submitted(+1)

The game was so good, i dont usually get scared by horror games but the poly ghost still managed to jumpscare me lol. I really like how it ends and the way it approaches the theme itself. Peak game overall!

Developer

thx for playin

Submitted(+1)

I didnt think I would get scared but when he ran out of the right door I actually jumped from my chair a little, great game!

Developer

Thx for playing

Submitted(+1)

This one actually made me stop and think before following instructions lol. I really liked how the game keeps putting you in situations where you have to question whether the narrator or the environment is telling the truth. The whole “do I trust this or do the opposite?” idea fits the theme really well. Solid work for a solo jam game!

Developer

thx for playing

I'll play your game

Submitted(+1)

omg i really enjoyed it but I struggled BAD with anything even slightly scary and this genuinely had me jumping out of my seat get that low poly ghost freak AWAY from me.

This is the best one I've played for the theme yet, the choice between listening to yourself, the environment, the narrator, or doing the opposite of what they say had me really paranoid, and I like the similarities to The Stanley Parable a lot!

Although simple, 3D visuals for a short game jam always impress me, and I think the sharp low-poly style does add to the spooky feeling anyway so I can't fault it.

Great stuff!

Developer

thx for playing

I'll play your game

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