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A jam submission

Please Leave the CarriageView game page

Ticket, please. Catch the fare dodgers.
Submitted by finalyfin — 9 hours, 48 minutes before the deadline
Rated by 45 people so far
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How does the game fit the theme?
Keep your eyes peeled. Any passenger may not be who they claim to be. Catch the fare dodgers.

What code and assets did you not make from scratch during the jam (if any)?
I used asset from itch(barely-games.itch.io/retro-engrave-uigui-kit) for my modal window, buttons and controls. Also, sound design was build from pixabay.com

How many people worked on the game?
1

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Submitted

love the papers please inspiration, I had a similar idea. Your execution was great, and love the animations haha. If you get a chance to try mine and get through the first round we've got at least one thing in common!

Submitted

The Papers Please inspiration is very clear here and it was executed pretty well. I like the artstlye and even though I thought the rules were very simple I still fell for a few passengers.
Nice work overall!

Submitted(+1)

I wasn't expecting to literally KICK people off hahahaha. I also didn't know you were able to tear of the tickets. I think an indication to tell new players would be a good addition! Cool game!!

Submitted(+1)

Good game! The only thing was that I couldn't click on the buttons under the ticket, so making them fully functional buttons would be a nice touch. I definitely wouldn't have solved it without the gifs.

Submitted(+1)

This is a really fun game! I could see this being expanded into a full game! The only thing I struggled with is the order of the stations! Great job!

Submitted(+1)

Original, nice visuals, enjoyable, overall a very solid game.

Submitted(+1)

Incredibly solid game. Instantly got the 'Papers please' vibes. Really funny how you kick people out as well. Only point of notice is that I figured out you had to rip off the ticket thingy when it was correct when looking at the clips you posted beneath. Maybe add that to the instructions?
If you'd like, you can play my game at https://tijntjohh.itch.io/work-in-progress

Developer(+1)

done :) very interesting world you made, good job! 

Submitted(+1)

kick people is really funny

Submitted(+1)

Overall Game is good, sticked to the theme concept

Submitted(+1)

That was a really well done game! Interesting premise, I eventually locked in enough to not keep losing my rep, it was fun :)

Submitted(+1)

Really addictive and well-thought-out game. It feels really polished, and I especially liked the way you tear off the ticket. I can see this becoming a spiritual successor to Papers, Please with more work. Amazing work!

Submitted(+1)

Nice game and a solid concept

Submitted(+1)

Kicking people out of the train car is such a genius idea!

Submitted(+1)

Really great take on the theme, the visuals were really well done, impressive you did that alone in that timespan, great job!

Submitted(+1)

Really interesting mechanics, and the music fits the game very well! I’d suggest using a clearer font, especially since this is a game where players need to read quite a bit of information. Overall though, it’s a really solid experience!

Submitted(+1)

this is super cute! second the unfortunate kick out bug but i see the vision and its super homey. nice job!

Submitted(+1)

Loved the game! A little bit of papers please and  a train journey. The UI could be better but I think the idea is really well executed during the time span of jam. Well done!

Submitted(+1)

Nice! All around very good submission. The kick animation and sfx is hilarious! I also love the ticket ripping. And you did it alone, well done man!

Submitted(+1)

I LOVE this idea and the gameplay. You introduce new features gradually and it was a pretty fun game! Well done. (the buttons weren't working for me, but I just marked them as bad in my head, haha).

Developer(+1)

If you happen to drop by again, please drag the ticket into the "kick out" zone. I definitely owe you one :) I made a poor choice regarding the UI element.

Thanks for your time!

Submitted(+1)

I see! I will def do that and play the game again. It was super fun.

Submitted(+1)

Generally a good game. I really liked the audio design.

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